Reviews for "If I Should Return..."

Sat May 07, 2005 11:51 am

I was mesmerised by the scene you pictured, really. The hopelessness rings in every word of it, you have done an amazing job to show it. Faramir was before my eyes, lost, drained of all feelings, going mechanically through his last conversation with his father - I imagined it exactly the same way.

And I loved it how you mentioned his concern about others, fathers and sons who will be killed with him; you could see that were the thoughts of a remarkable leader.

How good it did not happen the way he thought it would...

Regards,

Lilan

Sat May 07, 2005 4:47 pm

Very well written for a first story. I have to say that your words were an excellent look into Faramir's head. The only thing that bothered me were the few spelling and/or grammatical errors - nothing a beta reader can't fix. There's a place on the forum where you can post to find one for future stories.

Other than that, your storry was nicely crafted. Good job!

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