Reviews for "Surrender"

Wed Jun 29, 2005 8:22 am

Great chapters. Very enjoyable. The scene where Galadriel "tested" Elrond was great. I really liked that. You have written Galadriel to be very complex and she appears mysterious and unpredictable. It is great.

Happy writing. Smile smiley face

Wed Jun 29, 2005 7:01 pm

I like the way you show the playfullness between Celebrian and Elrond from her statement about him fearing his mother-in-law to the interplay between them before the halls of fire. The way you portray Cirdan is also delightful, the sound of his voice to his gentle jest at Galadriel. The exchange between Galadriel and Glorfidel was such an enexpected glimpse at their own stories. And as always, your descriptions of the fireflies and images of he halls, just delightful. Looking forward to more.

Mon Jul 11, 2005 3:20 pm

THis is very good! I'm enjoying it very much, and it is time for you to update again. nudge nudge

Thu Aug 11, 2005 1:38 pm

I hope you continue this soon. I loved Alliance. I think your descriptions a great and the characters as you portray them are so really.

Sun Sep 18, 2005 9:23 am

The long awaited sequel to Alliance. Space: what an awesome story. I like how you weave the memories from the past into the present. The way you describe the emotions of all. The struggle of Galadriel to make amends with the past and showing her motherly care for her only daughter: wanting only the best for her. The part with Glorfindel where Galadriel tries to find some living memory from the past... Thumb smiley face

Your Elrond is fantastic as always, so subtle you write about who he misses, especially the scene with Cirdan: very touching. I can go on telling you what more I loved, but then I would end up repeating your work in one review. I cannot wait what will follow next, but please, don't let us wait too long for the next chapter!

Thu Apr 20, 2006 1:18 am

I finished Alliance today, and I was soooooo glad to see the sequel. I echo the sentiments of the other reviewers. Great characterization, great dialouge, great, great, great!!! I can't wait for more.

Sun Mar 18, 2007 9:13 pm

Hello. I recently read Alliance and then I began to read this. Your take on the story of Elrond and Celebrian is fascinating and I was wondering if you were planning on continuing this story or not. Hopefully you do continue with it! Its a great story! Smile smiley face

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