Joined: 11 Dec 2003 Reviews: 16
Location: Southern California
Wed Jun 22, 2005 12:31 am
I liked the length...not too long ...and not too short... I liked your word choices and how you put your poem together. But I loved how you brought out Boromir's torment...the pull that he felt... eating away at him.
RobinKa
Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Tue Jun 28, 2005 10:29 am
I love the imagery in this one. Very well done, Lai