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SpaceWeavil

Joined: 27 May 2004
Reviews: 365
Location: Looking at shiny things
Sun May 15, 2005 4:39 pm

Lovely writing all throughout. You captured the characters wonderfully and the description was amazing. Very Happy smiley face
 
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GypsieRose

Joined: 09 Jul 2003
Reviews: 45
Location: Illinois, USA
Mon May 16, 2005 7:57 pm

Short yet satisfying. Angst is often so much more effective when underplayed. Gandalf's melancholy at the end is very moving also. I like this piece very much!

--Rose
 
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