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Shanalir
Joined: 27 Feb 2005 Reviews: 183
Location: Umm, anyone seen my map?
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Sun May 15, 2005 10:06 am
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You have an interesting start. I don't think I've seen any that viewed Eomer and Lothiriel's situation quite like this. I'll be watching this one.
(BTW, if you haven't already, why don't you pop over to the forums and post a Newbie thread. It'll give everyone a chance to welcome you to the site, and there are a lot of us that love to welcome new members. It's only a suggestion, mind.) |
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Kime

Joined: 15 May 2005 Reviews: 9
Location: Genève
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Sun May 15, 2005 10:27 am
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| Yes I was just thinking about the same thing when I read your story ... I hope you will not let us wait too long for the next chapter |
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flowingrace
Joined: 17 Apr 2005 Reviews: 27
Location: Between the land of the living and the land of the dead
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Sun May 15, 2005 3:27 pm
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| I really liked this beginning. It sounds like the story's going to be really good and interesting! It is a creative way to look at the relationship and I can't wait till you update! |
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krazykataave

Joined: 17 Dec 2004 Reviews: 127
Location: Immortalized by John Denver
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Sun May 15, 2005 5:55 pm
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| Very refreshing! It goes against most molds, and that is a good thing. Very nice, definately will be adding this one to my watched list. |
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Elentari

Joined: 13 May 2003 Reviews: 244
Location: Lost in elven dreams...
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Mon May 16, 2005 2:29 pm
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same as kk. You have an original look at the royal couple, which is interesting since it would be the most likely course. Hmm. i guess we all fangirl Eomer too much.
Very nice. |
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angelica

Joined: 16 May 2005 Reviews: 21
Location: at a hot, steamy, torrid, sweaty, passionate chess tournament
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Mon May 16, 2005 5:42 pm
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i caught this story yesterday, and i am very pleased that i did. the second chapter turned out nicely and i was pleasantly surprised to find it already updated. congratulations for your hard work, which is already beginning to pay with an excellent story.
p.s. how much of this story do you have written at this moment? |
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rohanion

Joined: 09 Feb 2005 Reviews: 216
Location: uk
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Mon May 16, 2005 6:35 pm
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I love Eomer stories and this certainly hits the mark. You have created a very good story, with lots of depth and character, - cant wait to read more  |
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angelica

Joined: 16 May 2005 Reviews: 21
Location: at a hot, steamy, torrid, sweaty, passionate chess tournament
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Wed May 18, 2005 6:39 pm
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i was very happy when i noticed that you updated. again, a expressively written chapter. update soon  |
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Eyborg
Joined: 08 May 2004 Reviews: 101
Location: Reykjavík, Iceland
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Thu May 19, 2005 9:46 am
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This is a very interesting story! I will be watching this one. Poor Lothy... marrying (and sleeping with) someone she doesn't love. Hopefully that will change very soon... 
Oh, and let's hope she won't do anything inappropriate with Elfhelm!  |
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Shanalir
Joined: 27 Feb 2005 Reviews: 183
Location: Umm, anyone seen my map?
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Thu May 19, 2005 10:02 am
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| I definitely like the new chapter. I'm curious to see how long it will take Eomer to come out of his happy fog, and realise that all is not as he had hoped, in his new marriage. I'm also wondering how long it will be before Lothiriel asks or confronts him on his dual personality. I'm eagerly looking forward to the next update. |
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