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AranelMinyatur
Joined: 21 Apr 2004 Reviews: 46
Location: Western Washington State
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Wed May 25, 2005 4:25 pm
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Oooh I was so excited to see an update!! I just ache for them both! Can't wait for the next update! No pressure......ha! |
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angelica

Joined: 16 May 2005 Reviews: 21
Location: at a hot, steamy, torrid, sweaty, passionate chess tournament
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Wed May 25, 2005 10:47 pm
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| ::sighs:: This is getting depressing (in a good way of course). I thought for a minute in chapter 6 you were going to have eomer come out and see elfhelm holding lothiriel and then going berserk thinking that lothiriel doesn't love him but loves elfhelm, and I am immensely glad you did not follow that slightly overused plotline. again, this story is shaping up rather nicely, and as always, update soon. |
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flowingrace
Joined: 17 Apr 2005 Reviews: 27
Location: Between the land of the living and the land of the dead
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Thu May 26, 2005 8:32 pm
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Yay, another chapter! It was cute, that you're separating them, and then letting them fall back in love. A love story with a twist...that they're already married! I'm so excited to see what happens next, and how Elfhelm is going to play in the plot. Can't wait till the next chapter! |
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AranelMinyatur
Joined: 21 Apr 2004 Reviews: 46
Location: Western Washington State
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Fri May 27, 2005 10:14 am
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I was SO excited to see the update in my email box!! Okay...I have to admit that at first I was shocked by Eomer's reaction but loved how she went willingly into his arms! I feel so bad for Elfhelm though.....he needs someone too! I'm really enjoying this story....can't wait for the next chapter! |
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nienor

Joined: 26 May 2005 Reviews: 58
Location: Cologne (Germany)
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Fri May 27, 2005 12:19 pm
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I always look forward to the next chapter! Please keep posting so fast!  |
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Shanalir
Joined: 27 Feb 2005 Reviews: 183
Location: Umm, anyone seen my map?
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Fri May 27, 2005 5:06 pm
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| Pregnant!!! Surprising news! Interesting to see Eomer's reaction to it. I'm hoping that you have some kind of comfort in mind for poor Elfhelm. I'm eagerly looking forward to the next chapter. Keep 'em coming! |
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flowingrace
Joined: 17 Apr 2005 Reviews: 27
Location: Between the land of the living and the land of the dead
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Fri May 27, 2005 9:08 pm
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| Wow! Update was very quick. ^_^ Poor Elfhelm! I hope you don't make him the bad guy, I like him! And Lothirel is pregnant...will this pull her and Eomer closer together? Update soon! |
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angelica

Joined: 16 May 2005 Reviews: 21
Location: at a hot, steamy, torrid, sweaty, passionate chess tournament
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Sat May 28, 2005 12:42 pm
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Good plot twist. I had been wondering when you would bring in the factor of Eomer's kid.
On a side note, and not to start a political debate, how exactly could Lothiriel, should she have chosen to do so, terminate the pregnancy? I really don't want to start a debate due to much nastiness on all sides, but how would she do that without causing her own death? PM me or just write back in your next author's note.
Thanks for the great chapter, well written and entertaining. |
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Shanalir
Joined: 27 Feb 2005 Reviews: 183
Location: Umm, anyone seen my map?
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Mon May 30, 2005 8:41 pm
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| I'm glad to see that Eomer and Lothiriel are growing closer, and that their regard for one another is growing deeper and more profound. Good or bad, I can't wait for the next chapter! |
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AranelMinyatur
Joined: 21 Apr 2004 Reviews: 46
Location: Western Washington State
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Mon May 30, 2005 8:44 pm
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Hmmmm....your author's note now has me curious as to what's going to happen next! Everything seems so wonderful...they are growing closer and the garden....how beautiful! It was fun to see her brother come to visit....she has just got to fall for Eomer soon....I keep wondering what more she is waiting for. Oooh the suspense builds! Just love it! Love the quick updates too....even over a holiday weekend! Impressive!  |
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