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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Tue May 17, 2005 1:45 pm
Really excellent, Thuri, a lovely twist on my expectations for this drabble. You really run the gamut here: pride, humility, adoration, wonder, love and humor! Well done.
 
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SpaceWeavil

Joined: 27 May 2004
Reviews: 365
Location: Looking at shiny things
Tue May 17, 2005 1:51 pm
Excellent portrayal of Feanor and a nice twist on the challenge topic - as always lovely writing. Very Happy smiley face
 
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Alassante

Joined: 11 Dec 2004
Reviews: 459
Location: Hitchhiking to Rivendell
Tue May 17, 2005 2:35 pm
OMG - that last line killed me. Shocked smiley face It was so beautiful and sweet, then the zinger. So you Mar. And as space said, as always - beautiful writing, very fluid and gave a touching voice to his emotions.
 
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Rhapsody

Joined: 11 Apr 2004
Reviews: 479
Location: Maglor's Lap
Tue May 17, 2005 3:22 pm
Oooooo this is a real nice drabble! I love the way you portrayed Feanor, he surely must have had fun creating it Wink smiley face And that last line! Perfect!
 
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Tue May 17, 2005 3:38 pm
Outstanding! What a twist Very Happy smiley face I thought of something completely different Wink smiley face Thank you Thuriniel
 
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picara

Joined: 08 Aug 2004
Reviews: 73
Location: Doriath
Wed May 18, 2005 6:55 am
Excellent. I loved seeing a loving side to Feanor. Loved it.
 
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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Wed May 18, 2005 9:58 pm
Sweet and poetic and ... funny. That last line was just priceless! hee. Plus, was good seeing nice side of Feanor.
 
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Elentari

Joined: 13 May 2003
Reviews: 244
Location: Lost in elven dreams...
Fri May 20, 2005 2:55 pm
ditto. Surprising and funny.
 
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ghettoelleth

Joined: 06 Nov 2004
Reviews: 378
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Fri May 20, 2005 9:45 pm
How wonderful and precious. What a fantastic ending, and so very...Feanorish. Wonderfully done Thu.
 
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Anieni
Joined: 27 Jan 2004
Reviews: 48
Location: Somewhere between fantasy and reality
Tue Jun 28, 2005 9:12 pm
Hee hee, this was simply awesome!

Only you could describe the creation of a true "jewel" with such perfection!
 
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