Joined: 06 Dec 2004 Reviews: 22
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Sat May 21, 2005 1:19 pm
Nicely done. You have captured the voices of the different characters very effectively; the thoughts sound exactly like they would be coming from the various characters. The emotions, too, are conveyed such that the drabbles are all poignant and moving. Makes me want to read more stories in the same vein...but maybe that's asking too much.
Ariel
Joined: 25 Apr 2003 Reviews: 48
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Tue May 24, 2005 6:36 pm
I'm not usually the drabble type, but these are lovely; reserved and in character. Nicely done, though from you I would expect nothing less.