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inglor

Joined: 26 Apr 2004
Reviews: 201
Location: Not here, not there, not anywhere
Thu Jun 23, 2005 12:11 pm
Interesting subject matter. Like how you potrayed her blindness.

I enjoyed reading it and am now pondering what happened to the refugees.
 
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Shanalir
Joined: 27 Feb 2005
Reviews: 183
Location: Umm, anyone seen my map?
Mon Jul 04, 2005 2:35 pm
Very interesting story. I do like how you wrote everything. Is there more coming?
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Wed Jan 11, 2006 7:05 am
Very nicely done. The wording was perfect. It does beg for more, though. LOL I did find a typo towards the end. "Long uncounted hours it took to find any others who were hidden in the deepest bowls of Utumno and Angband." You forgot the 'e' in 'bowels'.
Thank you for sharing.
 
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Aeode

Joined: 18 Apr 2007
Reviews: 52
Location: Solemn Sea
Mon Jul 30, 2007 6:23 pm
Wow, excellent Chapter 1!!!!!!!
 
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