Joined: 24 Jan 2004 Reviews: 310
Location: Icon by Alassante! Wow!
Fri May 27, 2005 8:30 am
I like this. Even though the beginning is based on the movie, you wrote it nicely and gave it some insights into the the characters' POVs that were interesting. And I love the idea of a fic that tells the story of Smeagol's descent. I will be watching this. I
SpaceWeavil
Joined: 27 May 2004 Reviews: 365
Location: Looking at shiny things
Sat May 28, 2005 3:01 pm
I really like your writing style generally, and this idea is extremely interesting. I don't think I've ever read a Smeagol-centric story and so I'm really looking forward to seeing your take on his story. Already you've added a lot of depth to the character we already know, and I'm pleasantly looking forward to more.