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SpaceWeavil

Joined: 27 May 2004 Reviews: 365
Location: Looking at shiny things
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Thu May 26, 2005 9:13 am
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Nice twist, neatly set up and unexpected. Very enjoyable and a great first fic Welcome to the site. |
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
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Thu May 26, 2005 11:39 am
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Congratulations on your first fic! Excellent drabble 
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picara

Joined: 08 Aug 2004 Reviews: 73
Location: Doriath
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Thu May 26, 2005 2:39 pm
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| This was very well done. I didn't expect Gollum. Great job. |
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ellisk

Joined: 24 Jan 2004 Reviews: 310
Location: Icon by Alassante! Wow!
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Thu May 26, 2005 5:30 pm
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| What a wonderfully unique idea. Clever. And very well written too! Great job. Hope you write more. |
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Alassante

Joined: 11 Dec 2004 Reviews: 459
Location: Hitchhiking to Rivendell
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Fri May 27, 2005 6:14 pm
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Great job! Everyone else has said everything I was going to say so I will just say ditto!  |
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kwannom
Joined: 08 Jan 2004 Reviews: 67
Location: Brazil
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Sat May 28, 2005 12:37 am
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Wow, that was great and unexpected. You really knew how to create something original!  |
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Rhapsody

Joined: 11 Apr 2004 Reviews: 479
Location: Maglor's Lap
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Mon May 30, 2005 10:16 am
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Wow!! Gollum so comletely captivated by his precious, falling down with her in his last dance.  |
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VanatheEverYoung
Joined: 22 Aug 2004 Reviews: 106
Location: USA
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Mon May 30, 2005 7:17 pm
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| Very good! I liked the twist at the end. I'm amazed at how creative these drabbles can be in only 100 words. Gollum and the Ring is a great example of a dance. |
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rohanion

Joined: 09 Feb 2005 Reviews: 216
Location: uk
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Thu Jun 02, 2005 4:35 am
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- Very clever! |
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004 Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
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Wed Jun 08, 2005 11:13 am
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| Surprised by the ending. Very good! And your first? I am impressed. (I threw away more than I have posted.) Such a build-up. Thank you for sharing. |
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