Reviews for "Danse Macabre"

Mon May 30, 2005 1:10 pm

Ooo good topic for this challenge and well written. As a medieval scholar, the dance of death has always been one of my favorite themes. I like your portrayal of it here. I particularly liked "The Servant of Flame now writhed in slime and shadow." Great job.

Mon May 30, 2005 2:13 pm

Excellent job!
This was very intense and evocative. I wanted to see the movie once more after reading your drabble. Very artistic portrayal and great idea. I found it hard to believe you had such a dynamic scene in only 100 words. My congratulations! This was great and worth paying for! Thank you for sharing Very Happy smiley face

Mon May 30, 2005 4:44 pm

Cool! Great language, and also some glimpse of music (I like music! Wink smiley face

). The title alone is great! I'll read more of your stories! Bounce smiley face

Mon May 30, 2005 7:25 pm

This is a great interpretation of "Dance." It felt like I was reading so much more than 100 words. You've such a great grasp on emotive language.

Mon May 30, 2005 8:14 pm

OOoh, Steve did good by you Space. Before you send him back, please have a little talk with him? I just got chills from that. Very elegantly stated. Of course, you never disappoint. Wonderfully original and artistic interpretation of the topic, above all else. I've be trying to get images of Feanor doing a quadrille out of my head all week.

Tue May 31, 2005 6:49 am

Oooooh, what a lyrical battle, quite indeed like a dance Smile smiley face

I love the way you pull elements together this way!

Tue May 31, 2005 1:17 pm

Very good interpretation of the battle. Very Happy smiley face

Its amazing what you fit into 100 words.

Wed Jun 01, 2005 5:59 am

Very nicely done. This had great imagery; it made you witness the action. And for a drabble, it managed to convey three hundred words worth. Thank you for sharing.

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