Reviews for "Payback"

Tue May 31, 2005 9:53 pm

Sounds like you've had a lot of experience with sibling rivalry. That was a perfect ending!

Wed Jun 01, 2005 12:42 am

What an ending of the Twins Trilogy. Great!!!

Wed Jun 01, 2005 3:38 am

Evil! And all this in just 300 words! It's great how you did this! Wave smiley face

Wed Jun 01, 2005 8:44 am

I just cracked up when I read this! When I read the first line, I said, 'Ooops, a typo, she meant "Elrohir said."' And then I read on. *Snort* Great job.

Wed Jun 01, 2005 7:03 pm

No way this is the last installment! Revenge! And somehow Glorfindel needs to get involved, now that he has been dissed. Hee.

Thu Jun 02, 2005 8:28 pm

I had to go back and read the other two installments but even without that this was pretty damn funny. My day is now complete. I agree with Viv. I think Glorfindel needs to get his revenge.

Fri Jun 03, 2005 11:49 am

I told you this before, but I shall tell you again (I sound like my mother saying that...anyway...) I really liked this. Nice and subtle, which is how I like my humour, and deliciously evil. Even if you don't continue this particular storyline, the idea of the rivalry in general between the twins could be worth exploring.

Wed Oct 26, 2005 12:35 pm

Ooo. Mean mean. Somebody's gonna fry for that. too funny!

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