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cymrulady
Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 10
Location: Wales
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Mon Jun 06, 2005 3:06 am
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| Wonderful - I'm still tingling! You paint a very vivid picture. Er - I'm going to stop now and go read it again - lol! |
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Emmess
Joined: 16 Oct 2004 Reviews: 6
Location: central florida
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Mon Jun 06, 2005 6:34 am
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I like this better every time I read it! It's wonderful...the imagery is just lovely!
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Shanalir
Joined: 27 Feb 2005 Reviews: 183
Location: Umm, anyone seen my map?
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Mon Jun 06, 2005 8:06 am
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| wow! I love the imagery. you have a gift for painting a picture with words! |
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mistybutterfly

Joined: 17 Apr 2005 Reviews: 27
Location: *tap tap tap* Hello, I\'m in your monitor. Can someone let me out?
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Mon Jun 06, 2005 10:58 am
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| Your words provoke very strong emotions. Very sensual, very loving. It leaves me breathless at the end. |
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Talasi
Joined: 29 Mar 2004 Reviews: 116
Location: Haldir\'s Lap
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Mon Jun 06, 2005 1:41 pm
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Yay!! I'm so glad you liked it. I am working on a few other things. Thank you so much, all of you, for reviewing and rating. I was afraid I should delete it.
Talasi
*writing more sensual smut* |
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
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Mon Jun 06, 2005 3:02 pm
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"He. Is. Beyond. Compare."
*gasp*
It's wonderful. So sensual, so poignant, so Haldir 
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Julie
Joined: 02 Feb 2004 Reviews: 23
Location: Texas
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Mon Jun 06, 2005 3:05 pm
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Talasi, you know I love this, and I'm so glad you decided to share it. For so long you have supported and encouraged countless fanfiction authors with lovely and positive reviews, and I'm thrilled to see you taking this brave step into the world of writing. You are so articulate and express yourself with such beautiful imagery that it takes my breath away. You obviously have a flare for the written word; I have seen it over and over just in your reviews and now we readers get a glimpse of what that talent can achieve. Thank you so much for sharing this sensual and delightful story. I look forward to reading anything else you decide to write. Your elf-tossing vignettes are wonderful too!  |
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trekqueen
Joined: 07 Jul 2004 Reviews: 43
Location: Chambers of the Balrog Slayer
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Mon Jun 06, 2005 5:47 pm
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Yummy descriptions you have going on in the story! Visualizing is always good. Glad you finally decided to put pen to paper (or is it keyboard to document now? ) and give us your own imaginative tidbit. You have lots of experience seeing what is liked in fanfiction so I'm sure you will know what we the readers and reviewers like to see. More sexy Haldir please!!!  |
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HeatherLynn
Joined: 28 Jun 2004 Reviews: 1
Location: SW Florida, USA
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Mon Jun 06, 2005 9:37 pm
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Just horrible!!! Not your story! The fact that I have to go take a cold shower!!! Love it girl!  |
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Sinda
Joined: 28 May 2004 Reviews: 8
Location: Southwest, USA
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Mon Jun 06, 2005 11:03 pm
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| I love this story, Talasi. Your descriptions are so beautiful. I hope to see more from you soon. |
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