Reviews for "If ever you met me, you wouldn't forget me..."

Wed Jun 08, 2005 3:50 pm

Very nice--Sam and his Oliphants (sp?). I am really enjoying the moments people are picking for this challenge. They are such great LotR moments and this is a great example of this. You did a nice job conveying the overwhelming nature of the moment in this.

Wed Jun 08, 2005 5:40 pm

I always liked Sam's awe of the Oliphaunts so I think this is a good idea. And I agree with picara--you did a good job showing how incredible the experience was for him. Good job.

Thu Jun 09, 2005 9:55 am

I love the way you managed to get the sense of wonder across in so few words. I think in a modern society, where we see photographs and pictures and television shows of weird and wonderful things from all over the world, that before the mass media, things still had that legendary feel, and seeing them for the first time was a momentous experience. I think you managed to portray that sort of experience really well in this drabble.

Mon Jun 13, 2005 2:15 pm

Well, I think you choose a great theme! And well done. You can feel his amazement of this wonder. Something he only heard about and before he can speak, you show us his thoughts Thumb smiley face

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