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rohanion

Joined: 09 Feb 2005
Reviews: 216
Location: uk
Sat Jun 11, 2005 7:04 pm
oh, very clever! Very Happy smiley face

A thoughtful and interesting piece, all delivered in a 100 words!
 
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ellisk

Joined: 24 Jan 2004
Reviews: 310
Location: Icon by Alassante! Wow!
Sat Jun 11, 2005 7:16 pm
Excellent choice of topics for the presents challenge and a great portrayal of Khamul. I need to go back and read the new chapters in Witch King after this. I just can't stand the suspense of waiting for new chaps in that story so I've been restraining myself until you have a bunch of new ones up to read at once. But this peek into the Nazguls' minds has driven me back again. Loved it. Especially the last line.
 
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Elentari

Joined: 13 May 2003
Reviews: 244
Location: Lost in elven dreams...
Sun Jun 12, 2005 3:12 pm
A wondeful insight, terrific choice of subject. His fascination with power overshadowing the hints that something was not quite right with him anymore... brilliant.
 
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NeumeIndil

Joined: 06 Jun 2005
Reviews: 156
Location: St. Louis, Missouri, USA
Sun Jun 12, 2005 6:54 pm
So that's what a drabble is!!! Sorry, Newbie. Surprised smiley faceops: Really cool idea. I like the description of the ring since I either don't remember or have never heard what the rings of power looked like. I take it the ring becomes very... precious to him? Wink smiley face Well done.
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Sun Jun 12, 2005 9:44 pm
Hmmm, foreboding of things to come? Why is it that what we most desire seldom seems as great once we have it? Thank you for sharing.
 
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Silvae

Joined: 28 Nov 2004
Reviews: 35
Location: Lyon, France
Mon Jun 13, 2005 6:28 am
As Elentari said, this was a great insight, and your Khamûl is perfect. The last sentence is great! Very Happy smiley face
Cheers,
Silvae
 
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Rhapsody

Joined: 11 Apr 2004
Reviews: 479
Location: Maglor's Lap
Mon Jun 13, 2005 2:09 pm
Hmmm a noble numenorean lord slowly falling for the power of the ring! A very treacherous one and I loved the way how you pictured the slow downfall. Thumb smiley face
 
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Alassante

Joined: 11 Dec 2004
Reviews: 459
Location: Hitchhiking to Rivendell
Mon Jun 13, 2005 5:52 pm
I thought I reviewed this but ooops! guess I didn't! This was great - showing the ring's seeping into him. I hate evil jewelry. Shocked smiley face
 
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Fyalee
Joined: 15 May 2005
Reviews: 16
Location: South of Legolas, North of Haldir and all around Éomer.
Tue Jun 14, 2005 12:12 pm
That was hauntingly beautiful. I loved the last line particularly!
 
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Saoirse

Joined: 17 Aug 2004
Reviews: 21
Location: In your closet
Tue Jun 14, 2005 1:29 pm
O! Chillingly lovely.
 
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