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Fyalee
Joined: 15 May 2005 Reviews: 16
Location: South of Legolas, North of Haldir and all around Éomer.
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Sun Jun 12, 2005 5:01 pm
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Yay! Your first contribution! You have been a constant support to me throughout the writing of my story so I just wanted to say thank you for that, you're a star
I thoroughly enjoyed these two drabbles! I thought it was adorable and completely hilarious that Arwen gave him a frog and ruined his papers. It was so cute that I got the fuzzies
Elrond's reaction was believable and the frog was so funny that he rocked my socks... That doesn't sound right. Anyway, he gave me the giggles! I hope to read more from you in the future! |
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004 Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
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Sun Jun 12, 2005 9:46 pm
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| Very nice. And to show two sides, that is double the pleasure. Thank you for sharing. |
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Silvae

Joined: 28 Nov 2004 Reviews: 35
Location: Lyon, France
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Mon Jun 13, 2005 6:25 am
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Very cute. I like the idea of Arwen being a tomboy. (She must have had therapy since or something. ) Poor Elrond! Office doors should be kept locked at all times . Really good job and bravo for your first posting!
Cheers,
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Rhapsody

Joined: 11 Apr 2004 Reviews: 479
Location: Maglor's Lap
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Mon Jun 13, 2005 2:05 pm
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Cute Makes you wonder how Arwen caught the frog and managed to keep it calm. |
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
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Mon Jun 13, 2005 2:33 pm
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Just let me say congratulations on your first fic! Excellent and extremely funny (I'm still giggling). Ah, kids... have no respect for Thranduil's report.
Rhapsody, I guess, her brothers helped her  |
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Alassante

Joined: 11 Dec 2004 Reviews: 459
Location: Hitchhiking to Rivendell
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Mon Jun 13, 2005 3:14 pm
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YAY!!! Welcome to the world of writing hon! Its about time you came over to the dark side with us.
Cute little drabbles. I feel sorry for poor Elrond - a tomboy and those twins. Valar help that man...elf...Peredhil. But his reaction was sweet.  |
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nienor

Joined: 26 May 2005 Reviews: 58
Location: Cologne (Germany)
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Mon Jun 13, 2005 5:49 pm
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Oh, lovely idea. Little Arwen.. this must have happened, what, *looks it up* 2780 years before LOTR.. That's a long time ago..
Nicely told! Even elf-children must behave like human ones now and then, can't just always sit around in nice dresses and look decorative. Sweet! |
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ellisk

Joined: 24 Jan 2004 Reviews: 310
Location: Icon by Alassante! Wow!
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Mon Jun 13, 2005 6:46 pm
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| Hehehe! That is great. Poor Elrond and I love the description of the frog. These were great and I really liked seeing them from two different POVs. Great job. |
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Lanthiriel

Joined: 15 Jun 2005 Reviews: 2
Location: Hangin in Mirkwood with my hot elfboy
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Thu Jun 16, 2005 12:34 pm
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Very cute...nice to know that Elf-kids get their hands dirty and risk warts...oh, of course, they are immune to that stuff...
Well done! You're up and running...must get started myself now!  |
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ghettoelleth

Joined: 06 Nov 2004 Reviews: 378
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Fri Jun 17, 2005 7:06 am
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Bravo first time no longer drabble virgin person!!
The visuals I got on this of Arwen and Elrond were priceless. Wonderfully wistful drabbles that met the objective very nicely. You did have an extra 'and' in there that you could have turned into a wart, lol, but 'tis only envy speaking, ahhh to have a word to spare. Great job hon! |
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