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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Fri Jun 17, 2005 3:48 pm
Nice idea, NeumeIndil, and sweetly written. It would have been so easy to overplay this but you stuck to understatement. The change in perspective at the end threw me a little, but I love the idea of the big guy having a pet that would love him so.
 
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ellisk

Joined: 24 Jan 2004
Reviews: 310
Location: Icon by Alassante! Wow!
Fri Jun 17, 2005 4:39 pm
Oh I'm a real sucker for animal stories. I loved this. I think Boromir would inspire this kind of loyalty. Poor thing! Very sad really.
 
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LadyBluejay

Joined: 03 Feb 2005
Reviews: 126
Location: UK
Sat Jun 18, 2005 7:36 am
Why are amimal stories always so much more heartbreaking? Nice one
 
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rohanion

Joined: 09 Feb 2005
Reviews: 216
Location: uk
Sun Jun 19, 2005 12:57 pm
This was different - I like to think of it as Boromir's faithful hound, waiting for his master's return - ahhhhh.

Very good, I enjoyed reading it!
 
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DreadLadyFreya

Joined: 31 Mar 2004
Reviews: 76
Location: A fantasy world, with beach front property
Tue Jun 21, 2005 11:58 pm
Ooh! Not fair! It's bad enough Boromir's missed and mourned by the humans (and elf and dwarf) who loved him, at least they understood what had happened. But his poor puppy! Crying or Very sad smiley face

Very well done! A very unique take on an OC. Smile smiley face
 
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DameNiamh
Joined: 08 Sep 2004
Reviews: 7
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Fri Jul 08, 2005 12:33 pm
If I hadn't read the other reviews I would never have guessed that you're writing about an animal! I envisioned a little girl! Beautifully done, looking forward to more. BB, Niamh
 
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SilverMoonLady

Joined: 14 Jul 2003
Reviews: 251
Location: Breaking in a Brandybuck... *wicked grin*
Mon Apr 10, 2006 5:45 pm
Wonderful ficlet! I just found this as I came to scoop up some of your other stuff to enjoy, and this just gave me a big sappy heart-squeeze of the best sort!! Love itSmile smiley face
 
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Tue Apr 11, 2006 3:17 am
This was so sweet and sad. You're right, there was no way for me to read it without shedding a tear.

Clap, Clap, Clap smiley face

Thank you for sharing.

Big Hug smiley face

Binka
 
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Radbooks

Joined: 29 Apr 2004
Reviews: 66
Location: Washington State
Tue Apr 11, 2006 7:01 pm
Very enjoyable. The loyalty of dogs and horses is very real and you've done a nice job of capturing it here.
 
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Sulriel

Joined: 07 Jan 2004
Reviews: 327
Location: Imladris (or maybe Texas ...)
Wed Apr 12, 2006 6:48 am
I very much enjoy alternate POVS such as you have here and I really enjoyed these, they're esepcially well done, IMO, the reader is dropped smoothly into the character and never jostled away from them. I like the steadfast loyalty the emotional, simple questions.
 
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