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NeumeIndil

Joined: 06 Jun 2005
Reviews: 156
Location: St. Louis, Missouri, USA
Thu Apr 13, 2006 11:27 pm

Thank you all. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Don't know where it came from, but I'm sure more will show up in the future.

Thanks again,
Neume
 
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Sun May 14, 2006 8:10 am

Chap. 3.

I really like this approach. Very cleverly written and told from an interesting POV. I like the way in which the character described Aragorn Smile smiley face And of course I giggled while reading But, then again, what do we understand of the lesser creatures like men anyway? After all, all creatures may have been created equal, but some were created more equal than others. Very true Very Happy smiley face Lovely piece. I'd like to see more.
 
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HeatherRae

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 119
Location: Bossier City, LA
Sun Jun 04, 2006 2:34 pm

I couldn't figure out what the third chapter was...but the cat in the fourth was very nifty. Very Happy smiley face I just couldn't figure out who the human was (though I suspected it was an elf). lol.
 
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Mon Jun 05, 2006 2:38 am

"Little watcher" Very Happy smiley face Yes, that's what a cat is Smile smiley face

I like chapter 4 very much. Very 'cattish' Very Happy smiley face Excellently done. I'm looking forward to the next part.
 
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Sommer
Joined: 10 Aug 2006
Reviews: 6
Location: Australia
Tue Feb 06, 2007 10:14 am

Beautifully done, as always. The second chapter in particular threatened to bring a tear to my eye; how sad it is for these poor animals, especially those whose happiness relies on a human bond. This has also been a great example of 'less is more' Smile smiley face
 
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