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angelica

Joined: 16 May 2005
Reviews: 21
Location: at a hot, steamy, torrid, sweaty, passionate chess tournament
Wed Jun 22, 2005 8:46 pm

This was very touching. Your writing really gave me the feeling of a kindred soul being torn from mine. A little Sueish, but just barely. I really enjoyed this.
 
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Aearwen

Joined: 11 May 2005
Reviews: 49
Location: Austria
Sun Jan 29, 2006 4:27 pm

Being a Gondolin fan, I soaked up that story. Not an extreme mary sue and I liked to read it
 
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Aglarendis
Joined: 16 Jun 2005
Reviews: 4
Location: Missouri
Sat Mar 29, 2008 1:14 am

I'm just about in tears here. I have often imagined the fall of Gondolin because of another of my favorite of Tolkien's characters, Pengolodh the scribe. Your descriptions of the festival, of your characters, of the battles, the people grabbing their posessions, all were very poignant. I loved your picture of little Earendil! I loved your picture of the eagles coming to help the elves. Please keep up the excellent writing!
 
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kaputt
Joined: 24 Aug 2014
Reviews: 3
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Tue Aug 26, 2014 4:41 pm

The happiest became the unhappiest in one day.
OC is not really Mary Sue for me, better than some with 'Not Mary Sue' statements.
She might be pregnant... for sequel.
 
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