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Ves

Joined: 15 Feb 2005
Reviews: 4
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Tue Jun 21, 2005 10:13 am

Oh, I love this tale. All cat lovers should read this story.
 
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Tue Jun 21, 2005 11:46 am

This was very sweet and adorable.
I love your OFC. You captured her behaviour and thoughts Very Happy smiley face perfectly.
 
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Elentari

Joined: 13 May 2003
Reviews: 244
Location: Lost in elven dreams...
Tue Jun 21, 2005 12:37 pm

Wow. That's all I can say right now... wow.

A cat?

You definitely surprised me. well done.
 
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DreadLadyFreya

Joined: 31 Mar 2004
Reviews: 76
Location: A fantasy world, with beach front property
Tue Jun 21, 2005 11:52 pm

How very sweet! You had me going until the end. A dead bird. I, myself, have been the recipient of such "gifts" (usually lizards) so I can feel for Orophin! Laughing smiley face
 
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LucyTia
Joined: 16 Mar 2004
Reviews: 16
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Wed Jun 22, 2005 4:25 am

This is too gorgeous for words. And my online name is a composite of my cats' names. You captured feline determination and propensity of these little beasties for leaving “gifts” just perfectly. Orophin was pretty nice, too!

Cheers

Vicki

(Mother of Lucy and Tia!)

PS: typo in your intro.
 
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rohanion

Joined: 09 Feb 2005
Reviews: 216
Location: uk
Wed Jun 22, 2005 11:20 am

how clever! I never guessed until the very end - a cat! What an original idea Very Happy smiley face

Your little fic made me smile, all the more so as an owner of three cats myself!
 
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jasmine08
Joined: 28 Aug 2004
Reviews: 4
Location: Washington State, USA
Wed Jun 22, 2005 7:18 pm

Very well done. I must admit I was very supprised to find out a cat was the one.

I could just see one of my 4 cats doing the same thing, though with mice not a bird.
 
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Shanalir
Joined: 27 Feb 2005
Reviews: 183
Location: Umm, anyone seen my map?
Thu Jun 30, 2005 11:34 am

Oh my, what a surprise at the ending! I kind of had a feeling when she "descended to the forest floor" to look for her next offering that it might be an animal, but no idea what kind. Excellent delivery, and great writing style. I, too have been the recipient of such gifts, though oddly enough, my cats prefer to bring their finds inside still alive, and release them in the house for me to find scurrying all over the place. (Can't count the number of lizards and mich they've brought in. They also go for the oddities. Twice a live bird, and once a bat!) Great story. Sweet as can be!
 
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