Reviews for "The Bond"

Sun Aug 17, 2003 9:24 pm

Generally, I'm not too fond of "girl joins the Fellowship" stories, and okay yeah, some of the story on a whole seemed a little contrived. But you know what? I realized about two chapters in that I don't give a crap. It was a nice, sweet, romantic story, with well-written action, hot sexual tension. And that's all I really need. So brava and well done, and I look forward to seeing what you do next. Smile smiley face

Tue Aug 19, 2003 7:15 am

my quilty pleasure is LOTR fanfiction. My even quiltier pleasure is a well-written Mary-Sue! Surprised smiley face

ops: This is by far one of the best Mary-Sue's that I have read! The character and story is well written, and she's strong. Thank god you didn't write her as a female that couldn't even wipe her butt onless someone was there to help her!! Beer smiley face

She also fits very nicely into the books; very seamless and fluid.

I really like the play between her and Aragorn (little brother, little sister). Dude smiley face

Can't wait to see what comes with the update and PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!

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Sat Aug 23, 2003 9:52 pm

Such a non-Mary Sue that I didn't really think of her as one!

Please keep writing. I admit to preferring Legolas falling in love with an elf, not a human. In Tolkien, a human/elf bond is so very rare. I would like to think that Aragorn and Arwen are the exception, not the rule.

Fri Sep 12, 2003 5:07 pm

Please write another chapter where Legolas and Eliwen make up. Very touching. Very Happy smiley face

Tue Sep 16, 2003 7:18 pm

Possibly one of the best OFC's I've ever read. Excellent job!

Sat Oct 04, 2003 8:21 am

My goodness! Why isn't anybody reviewing to this more often? I love this story! One of the Best I have EVER read! Wonderful job!

Tue Oct 07, 2003 4:47 pm

Excellent work, my dear, as always!!! Every time you update you make me very happy and also regret that my own story is over ...

Keep up the great job, amiga mía! Wink smiley face

Sun Nov 23, 2003 5:02 pm

Amazing story. Now that november is nearly over, do we get more updates? :begging face: LOVE IT!!!!!

Tue Dec 02, 2003 10:31 am

This may seem as a Mary-Sue character but she isn't, the way you've created and moulded both the characters of Legolas and Eliwen is beautiful, it's such a beautifully consturcted romance with real feeling and depth to it. This really is a wonderfully told tale you are a superb writer, please add more soon!

Sun Dec 07, 2003 9:25 pm

Keep the story going, we all need more chapters!! They'd better get back together again soon...

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