Joined: 27 May 2004 Reviews: 365
Location: Looking at shiny things
Sun Jun 26, 2005 9:10 am
A nice summation of Elrond's life, and it neatly acknowledges just how much he's contributed to the history of Middle-earth so far. My only gripe was more a matter of personal taste I think than any reflection on the writing - you obviously have a wonderful grasp of words and I'm looking forward to looking into your other poems here - but I wasn't too keen on the metre and rhyme used. The couplets just struck me as a bit too jaunty. But these things are incredibly subjective and, and usually I prefer poetry that is less rigid in style / rhyme etc. I'm sure others might interpret it differently. Once again I'm not meaning that as insulting or nasty - just my opinion. If you want me to explain anything I've said in this review, don't hesitate to PM me.
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Joined: 24 Jan 2004 Reviews: 310
Location: Icon by Alassante! Wow!
Sun Jun 26, 2005 2:37 pm
I agree that this does a wonderful job emphasizing all that Elrond contributed to Middle Earth. Of all the characters in Tolkien's world, I always found him the most tragic. Great job.