Reviews for "Forever, My Love"

Sat Jul 02, 2005 6:11 pm

This is such a simply but deeply touching tale featuring two OC's. The setting is in Middle Earth, but for the rest it could have taken place anywhere, which makes it an excellent story.

Especially the last lines are like poetry to me: Their children, and the crowd, began walking back to the city. With the next gust of wind, the spirits flew out over the sea, their laughter sparkling like the sun on the sea. So beautifully written and so tangible... You did a great job with these orginial characters! Thumb smiley face

Wed Sep 14, 2005 11:29 pm

Waaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh...this is SO sweet!!! ^_^ I loved the whole storyline, the words flowed so smoothly of a tale love fated. ^_^

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Reviews for "Forever, My Love"