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HamsterofDOOM

Joined: 13 May 2005
Reviews: 8
Location: I\'m stuck in a bucket!
Wed Jun 29, 2005 3:54 pm
I like your story very sweet!
 
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NobleBone
Joined: 17 May 2005
Reviews: 6
Location: Like you care
Fri Jul 01, 2005 2:04 pm
Um, I was kind of bored. I read somewhere that if you can cut 10% out of your story and it still sounds good, then you're better off; it definitely struck me as too wordy. Good plot though.
 
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ellisk

Joined: 24 Jan 2004
Reviews: 310
Location: Icon by Alassante! Wow!
Sun Jul 03, 2005 11:36 am
I really enjoyed these. I don't think I have ever read anything about Eärwen's courtship or marriage. I thought the language was wonderful and the story very sweet. Great job!
 
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