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Leaward
Joined: 11 Dec 2004
Reviews: 16
Location: a tiny padded room in Arnor
Mon Aug 22, 2005 8:41 pm

I had never thought of Faramir and Halbarad in such a way before -- but you're right, they both were guardians of their land. And I think you've got Halbarad's character down beautifully. I too see him as the carrier of tales of old, the man who could lift his men to fight and from their doldrums. Beautifully done!
 
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eyesofsky
Joined: 09 Apr 2007
Reviews: 5
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Sun May 27, 2007 11:28 am

Both beautiful in language and intent. The frame of the poem and the speech lapsing into thought is skilfully done, the scene came alive before my eyes as I heard his words in my head.
 
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