Reviews for "Ullume, Ten Meles (Forever, For Love)"
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rohanion

Joined: 09 Feb 2005 Reviews: 216
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Sun Jul 10, 2005 9:03 am
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Wow - this is interesting!
So Legolas has found his one true love, but sadly she has no recollection. . . poor Leggy! I wonder what he will do to jog her memory (this could get very intersting!)
This is a fine story, and you have written eight chapters already! You have certainly been a busy bee!
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shadowslayer
Joined: 27 Nov 2004 Reviews: 24
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Sun Jul 10, 2005 10:08 am
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This story is quite intresting, and well written.
Keep up the good work and please keep going.  |
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ThePerfectFlaw
Joined: 15 Jul 2005 Reviews: 2
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Fri Jul 15, 2005 5:43 pm
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Wonderful story. The plot is well thought out and captivating. i only have one sugestion. (it is not about your writing techniques, however, for you are very talented) there were words in the story spoken in elvish, that did not become traslated later in the story. it is just my suggestion that you add translations for those readers like myself who cant really figure out what they mean. but other than that, keep up the excelent work!  |
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stoneflwr1
Joined: 24 Mar 2005 Reviews: 38
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Thu Sep 01, 2005 9:55 pm
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This is a really good story so far and I hope you are able to update soon!  |
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NierielRaina

Joined: 05 Sep 2006 Reviews: 40
Location: Texas
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Thu Sep 07, 2006 8:14 pm
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This is a great story! But you need to finish it!!! come on...don't leave us hanging!!!
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CandissD

Joined: 06 Oct 2006 Reviews: 34
Location: Alabama
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Wed Jan 03, 2007 6:39 pm
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Love it - please update!  |
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