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Rhapsody

Joined: 11 Apr 2004 Reviews: 479
Location: Maglor's Lap
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Thu Jul 14, 2005 3:03 pm
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Oh this one is so cute! I love it Just the image of Haldir with his little girl is priceless! Thank you! |
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004 Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
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Thu Jul 14, 2005 5:08 pm
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| You are welcome. I really enjoyed this one. |
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
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Fri Jul 15, 2005 12:56 am
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No, no, I'm not shocked 
Lovely little piece, very clever and enjoyable. Thanks  |
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Elentari

Joined: 13 May 2003 Reviews: 244
Location: Lost in elven dreams...
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Fri Jul 15, 2005 9:39 am
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Is it a hint of how naughty I have become, or was it actually intentional that the drabble looked as something completely different before the last line?
well done. |
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004 Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
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Fri Jul 15, 2005 10:21 am
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Well, it is a trend. I am working my way up to smut, but the muses are not cooperating. They demand chastity. So, they let me write the first part, then barge in and do the ending. It is getting quite frustrating.  |
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DreadLadyFreya

Joined: 31 Mar 2004 Reviews: 76
Location: A fantasy world, with beach front property
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Sat Jul 16, 2005 12:48 am
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Oh, naughty, naughty Rous! It's not nice to tease us like that!  |
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isilelensar
Joined: 23 Jun 2005 Reviews: 61
Location: SE Tennessee
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Sat Jul 16, 2005 2:30 am
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That last line was a big surprise, but cute all the same. Very nicely done! Haldir and his daughter planting flowers...
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rohanion

Joined: 09 Feb 2005 Reviews: 216
Location: uk
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Sat Jul 16, 2005 2:40 am
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Cleverly written!
I thought this was a smutty little drabble staring Haldir, only to find out on completion of reading that it was in fact, a sweet and fatherly Haldir!
Excellent style Rous |
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LydiaB

Joined: 19 Nov 2005 Reviews: 68
Location: Russia
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Fri Jan 06, 2006 12:07 pm
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Te he Both with a twist and rather twisted! Thanks for the recommendation; I liked this a lot. |
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