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DreadLadyFreya

Joined: 31 Mar 2004
Reviews: 76
Location: A fantasy world, with beach front property
Mon Jul 18, 2005 3:32 pm
Oooh! *shudders* Very nice! Quite a bit of emotion packed into those five lines.

My goodness, is there NOTHING you can't do?
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Mon Jul 18, 2005 9:55 pm
I cannot pee standing up. I cannot write sex scenes. I cannot win an argument with the Dude. That is about it.
 
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Xyzzy
Joined: 20 Jul 2005
Reviews: 5
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Wed Jul 20, 2005 8:18 am
Cute!
Especially the last line.
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Wed Jul 20, 2005 5:24 pm
Cute? I am not sure I would have used quite that word. But, eh, interpretation, huh?
 
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LydiaB

Joined: 19 Nov 2005
Reviews: 68
Location: Russia
Fri Nov 10, 2006 3:10 pm
This was so very atmospheric - I couldn't resist a little shudder in response.
 
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