Reviews for "Imladris Revisited"

Wed Jul 27, 2005 7:14 pm

Very nice. I don't often review because I never know what to say. I enjoyed this. Only one thing I would wish, it seemd that during the gifting of the sword we are not privvy to much of how Aragorn reacts. I would have enjoyed seeing Aragorn's love for Elrond in return. Smile smiley face

Fri Aug 26, 2005 11:59 am

I loved your first sentence, exactly as Elrond would think and a great dramatic opener. You have a keen eye for personalities and show it in gestures and dialogue, good characterisations. Elrond's conflict as a father to foster son Aragorn and to daughter Arwen is well drawn. I can feel his emotion. Nice advice from Gandalf full of perception and wisdom. Good inclusion of the histroy behind this moment in Elrond's thoughts. beautiful image of the reforged sword and the scene at the memorial is wonderful. Like the previous reviewer it would have been lovely to see some of Aragorn's emotion and feeling too here toward Elrond and his destiny. This was a really well done challenge.

Wed Nov 02, 2005 5:53 am

Um, what they said. This is a great and well-written piece. I was hard pressed to find where you started deviatiing, then realized that I had missed that point. It was difficult to not get caught up in the story. I would like to point out that you do have a few typos. Otherwise, this was very enjoyable.
Thank you for sharing.

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Reviews for "Imladris Revisited"