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ElenaTiriel

Joined: 17 Mar 2004
Reviews: 132
Location: The Grey Havens
Tue Jul 26, 2005 4:23 pm

I like this, Wilwarin! Of course, Arnor would also have a steward to rule when Elessar was in the South Kingdom.... very well thought out! Very nicely descriptive. I especially like how you point out that he, too, had suffered loss in the war years. Very nice drabble!

- Barbara
 
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nienor

Joined: 26 May 2005
Reviews: 58
Location: Cologne (Germany)
Wed Jul 27, 2005 7:04 pm

Very nice drabble!

I agree with Elena Tiriel, there must have been someone like him to care for Arnor.

I have to say that the man seems a bit vain, with all that looking-in-the-mirror. Wink smiley face But then, Dunedain are just human beings.

No, honestly, I like this, especially the part about the brother who has died.

Sorry I don't write more, but I have been around for most of the night (I like white wine Smile smiley face) so please credit me for still writing almost coherently in a foreign language.

All the best, Nienor
 
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Rhapsody

Joined: 11 Apr 2004
Reviews: 479
Location: Maglor's Lap
Fri Jul 29, 2005 3:02 pm

Oh I love this. I gather Haladan is Halbarad's brother? Such a nice touch on that! It must have been hard on him to either be joyfull or full with grief. A glorious day, but so many died..

Thank you!
 
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