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Tylany

Joined: 07 Aug 2005 Reviews: 14
Location: Stuck in a daydream.
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Mon Aug 08, 2005 11:57 am
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This is a very captivating story. With a good chacter development.
She fits very nicely into the story I hope you update  |
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Ennorwen
Joined: 02 Dec 2004 Reviews: 5
Location: CT USA
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Mon Aug 08, 2005 5:00 pm
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My Dear Rozzan:
I am so glad that you have posted this story here - I think it fits perfectly into OSA's format and mien. And look - many new readers already. I think you will like it here!
Love, Ennorwen |
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evenstar5

Joined: 20 Mar 2005 Reviews: 61
Location: usa
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Tue Aug 09, 2005 12:58 am
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When will we see an update? I raelly like this story. It is so beautiful.
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LucyTia
Joined: 16 Mar 2004 Reviews: 16
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Tue Aug 09, 2005 4:21 am
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I'm so happy you've begun to post here ... much easier to download and keep track. I've been following this story elsewhere and it's just a superb read.
Cheers
Vicki |
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ElflingImp
Joined: 14 Jul 2005 Reviews: 128
Location: Some where in Middle Earth
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Tue Aug 09, 2005 7:26 pm
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Wow! I found this story while sifting thru lots of others you know looking for one to really pull me in. I love the way you are telling it,it is really great if fact a gem Please More !  |
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evenstar5

Joined: 20 Mar 2005 Reviews: 61
Location: usa
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Thu Aug 11, 2005 5:34 pm
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This is a great story!!!!!!!! I love your character development. It is nice to think that one of our favorite elves Legolas doesn't have to be lonely. I love your o/c. She is full of fire and spirit. I cannot wait until chapter 5. Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep up the great work!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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evenstar5

Joined: 20 Mar 2005 Reviews: 61
Location: usa
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Wed Aug 17, 2005 5:10 pm
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Chapter 5 & 6 are just wonderful. Very nice romance interlude. I just can't wait for the next chapter. I really like your o/c. She has a lot of fire. Keep up the great work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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twilla
Joined: 27 Jan 2005 Reviews: 33
Location: Los angeles
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Tue Aug 23, 2005 12:59 am
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Oh. My. God.
The first kiss was soooo beautiful, I felt like I was right there sandwiched between leggy and the O/C...damn.
So good....it hurts.
You have a way with words dear.
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ElflingImp
Joined: 14 Jul 2005 Reviews: 128
Location: Some where in Middle Earth
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Fri Aug 26, 2005 2:48 pm
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Well that last chapter was very,very good. I liked the ending too Yes you do have a way with words!  |
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rohanion

Joined: 09 Feb 2005 Reviews: 216
Location: uk
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Fri Aug 26, 2005 7:28 pm
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for some reason I put this on my watched stories list - but have not left you a reveiw in the past!
Shame on me! I cannot believe I did not let you know how good this little story of yours is. ops:
Great last chapter, I love your portrayal of a sexy legolas, very yummmy I shall be following this eagerly, and leaving many more reviews! *Rohannion slaps her own hand in shame*
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