Joined: 27 Sep 2003 Reviews: 96
Location: The ruins of Tharbad.
Sat Sep 27, 2003 6:40 pm
One had always wondered about the happenstance of allowing an inexperienced male loose in a room with too many toiletries.
This is wonderfully original.
Will there be a sequel detailing the reactions of all and sundry to Our Hero's new-found boquet?
NenyaCulariel
Joined: 23 Feb 2004 Reviews: 3
Location: Canada
Mon Feb 23, 2004 8:18 pm
Ahahaha! Very funny. I enjoyed your purposeful over-use of flowery and long-winded language. The story *sounded* like strawberry shampoo and spray-on perfume! And I sort of understand where he's coming from, having been introduced to some of the more exotic feminine toilette products rather late in my life. They can be so confusing, even for a girl! Maybe this is one of the nightmares Sauron tormented Gorlim with? At any rate, this was a story very worthy of bearing the name "humour" and "light fluff". A !
--Nenya
Rous
Joined: 20 Mar 2004 Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Fri Oct 22, 2004 8:28 am
Great! I loved it. Men! Thanks.
RobinKa
Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Sat Jun 19, 2010 11:41 am
Who knew soap could be so dirty?
LMFAO!
This is hilarious, and I'm very glad I started poking about this corner of the archive. Greatly done!