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Elentari

Joined: 13 May 2003
Reviews: 244
Location: Lost in elven dreams...
Tue Aug 16, 2005 10:16 am

Sauron! One determined evil boy, is he not.

Very nice.
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Tue Aug 16, 2005 11:36 am

Hmmm, I just realized what was written above. Sorry, but this is more Saruman. But, even so, determined, he is that. I just figured that even he could hope. Thank you for reading and commenting.
 

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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Tue Aug 16, 2005 2:53 pm

Very good Rous; even the fact that at first I was confused at to the speaker's identity was interesting since there is more than one nine-fingered ring-bearer, as it were. That you see so easily into Sauron's heart is a little scary though, Shocked smiley face Smile smiley face
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Tue Aug 16, 2005 3:08 pm

I had best see into someone's heart; he plays an integral part in my fic. *shivers* I am not looking forward to that. Thank you for reading, though.
 
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Shanalir
Joined: 27 Feb 2005
Reviews: 183
Location: Umm, anyone seen my map?
Sun Aug 21, 2005 11:31 am

Great drabble. I don't think it's twisted at all. Every living being has to have hope. It's what you hpe for that defines you as good or evil. I really liked the writing style. And it does scream Sauron to me.
 
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