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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
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Sat Aug 20, 2005 7:33 am
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There are some nice moments in this story, and I like that your squire is somewhat priggish and naively so certain of Gondor's supremacy - it's very endearing. And as the author or a similar story  I can only giggle at how irresistable Gondorian men seem to be for the Elves of Imladris! |
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
Reviews: 269
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Sat Aug 20, 2005 10:19 pm
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I don't think I've ever read a story where a Man was pursued by a female Elf. Reading this story has made me realize that. Hmm...
Your stories are always so full of vivid imagery and fantastic charaterizations. Conner is so naive. I almost feel sorry for the poor fellow. Glorchiniel and Glawareth are so sly! I must say that I love their boldness.
Great chapter, Mary! I can't wait to see what these two have in-store for Conner. Hopefully, whatever they have planned won't be more than he can handle. 
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inglor
Joined: 26 Apr 2004
Reviews: 201
Location: Not here, not there, not anywhere
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Mon Aug 22, 2005 11:37 am
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Convincing characters. Elves very elfy for lack of a better word. Enigmatic, beautiful, cunning, confident, very catlike. Were it not for the stupid LaCE, this is how I would imagine Elves to be. I enjoyed how the sisters seemed to know how he would react. They knew what buttons to push and which ones to avoid. And the little hussies acted like they have done this before...Rangers?
Conner very much the squire. Always fearful of blemishing his new (compared to his lord) reputation and honor. Blustering about honor and Gondor.
Lots to enjoy in this fic, not only the story but how you told it
Can't wait to see where this goes.
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inglor
Joined: 26 Apr 2004
Reviews: 201
Location: Not here, not there, not anywhere
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Thu Aug 25, 2005 2:48 pm
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Ruined... that could be his new name. Conner the Ruined.
Oh wow, ultimate male Tolkien Geek fantasy, two elleth and and hot tub. I very much found myself enviing the boy during the washing phase. And then there was the fun stuff, very nicely done, enough detail without being too. Got a little confused about positioning but found myself not caring. Conner's reactions were priceless.
Again, the writing is excellent, no matter the subject.
I dearly hope you continue this, not only for the male fantasy stuff but I am interested in what Conner does next. Smut is easy to come by but good smut in a really good story is very hard to find.
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Aearwen
Joined: 11 May 2005
Reviews: 49
Location: Austria
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Fri Sep 02, 2005 4:11 pm
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| I am again proved right, that you are a wonderful writer. It is amazing how you play with words that form into pictures in my head. BRAVO!!! |
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Sulriel
Joined: 07 Jan 2004
Reviews: 327
Location: Imladris (or maybe Texas ...)
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Thu Dec 08, 2005 3:36 pm
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