Joined: 12 May 2003 Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Wed Aug 24, 2005 3:17 pm
Nice job, Cressida. I particularly liked the casual yet caring tone I heard between your brothers, as though they'd just continued an ongoing conversation.
Rous
Joined: 20 Mar 2004 Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Thu Aug 25, 2005 6:00 am
Nicely done. You can see the closeness between them. This is a well done glimpse that could not be seen otherwise. Thank you for sharing.
Ningloreth
Joined: 31 Dec 2003 Reviews: 8
Location: Manchester, UK
Thu Aug 25, 2005 12:26 pm
This is a real story (in just 100 words!) and not just a description of action.
Rhapsody
Joined: 11 Apr 2004 Reviews: 479
Location: Maglor's Lap
Fri Aug 26, 2005 4:41 pm
Oh, and we all know what Faramir dreamt about! Beautifully written and the bond between them is touching here.