Joined: 11 Apr 2004 Reviews: 479
Location: Maglor's Lap
Thu Aug 25, 2005 1:30 am
Oh! Beautiful! I can just see them standing there, waiting for the final words and the big run down on Pellenor fields!
Rous
Joined: 20 Mar 2004 Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Thu Aug 25, 2005 5:58 am
Great write. My only crit is the line: "Back in Rohan." Just a grammar tick. Otherwise, I can feel them waiting and the tension. Thank you for sharing.
RobinKa
Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Thu Aug 25, 2005 12:02 pm
Very well done This made me want to watch the movie once more. Thanks for sharing.