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Kielle
Joined: 15 Sep 2003
Reviews: 1
Location: Minas Tirith, Gondor, Arda
Mon Sep 15, 2003 12:33 am
I'm not just reviewing this because it's yours or because you gave me the link. I'm reviewing it because I love the idea, and the structure, but mainly because that last verse gave me chills and I had to go back and read it again, aloud. Which means it's the best. Like Poe. Very Happy smiley face .-=K=-.
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Thu Oct 28, 2004 6:03 am
Ooooo. Unusual rhyming scheme. It really flowed, once I caught on to it, like the rivers. Great imagery. Thank you very much for sharing.

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Yavanie

Joined: 02 Jun 2004
Reviews: 122
Location: Texas
Thu Oct 28, 2004 9:02 am
Ditto. Great description of Merry's journey river by river. It even flowed like the rivers. Nicely done.
 
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