Joined: 12 May 2003 Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Wed Dec 24, 2003 2:25 pm
A wonderful idea - simple yet rich. I found the first verse a little troublesome, however, with its overly familiar "all thing's bright ... " couplet and rhyme scheme different from the other verses.
SilverMoonLady
Joined: 14 Jul 2003 Reviews: 251
Location: Breaking in a Brandybuck... *wicked grin*
Sun Apr 11, 2004 4:14 pm
Neat! I'm not much of a poet, but I liked the subject matter quite nicely It's always the little things...!
Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004 Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda