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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003
Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
Thu Sep 08, 2005 2:41 pm
This is SO SAD.... Crying or Very sad smiley face

Oh, my... it is so disturbing in many levels...
 
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ElennaElemirre

Joined: 08 Mar 2005
Reviews: 22
Location: East of the great sea
Fri Sep 09, 2005 4:57 am
*Tear* That was lovely * sniff sniff* and so sad. Sad smiley face

Your wrote it so eloquently too, in little snippets but it completely captured the spirit
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Sun Nov 27, 2005 6:15 am
I am not sure how much this would follow the events that actually took place. It seems a great deviation. I love the song, and it would work very well, just not with this particular pairing.

One thing I found distressing was the inconsistancy in verb tenses. You use past and then present and then back again. This makes it hard to follow. You may want to have someone beta this for spelling errors, also.

Thank you for sharing.
 
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