Reviews for "Cry No More"

Fri Aug 29, 2003 4:33 pm

That was beautiful.

Wed Dec 24, 2003 2:21 pm

Lovely; so sweet and yet brave and determined. I particularly liked "gave ... his name" and that the refrain is in a shorter pattern than the verses. (There's a typo, though - 'brough' for 'brought' 3rd line 4th stanza.)

Sun Feb 08, 2004 10:45 pm

This entranced me. That is hard to do, because as a critical poetry reviewer, I'm always on the lookout for little mistakes or gliches and the like, but after a few lines I just sat back and let your poem carry me away. Your rhythm never faltered one beat! ::applauds profusely:: That is an amazing feat! You articulated your idea so well, with such an original style and pattern. Absolutely superb job. It is a crime that this has not gotten more reviews/hits/ratings.

Sun Apr 18, 2004 7:00 pm

Very nice. I like the rhythm. The flow was even. If it is uneven, the author loses me. I have not finished more poems because of that. I even read it through again. Caught the typo, though. Wink smiley face

Wed Jul 07, 2004 1:07 am

I liked this very much! Nice imagery, and though I'm just repeating what others have said, very lovely flow Smile smiley face

Wed Jul 07, 2004 5:45 am

Reread this. Still very nice. Would like to see more. Thank you.

Mon Jul 26, 2004 10:49 am

I enjoyed this. It has a lovely rhythm and I think you've captured Rosie's voice and Sam's character very well.

Sun Jun 12, 2005 3:57 pm

This is lovely. How beautiful.

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