It was obvious from reading the first few lines that it was well written, as evidenced by your use of language and dialogue. Tis a shame it was so short, but perhaps you will have some more stories to share with us soon
Thanks for sharing this one!
ellie
Joined: 30 Aug 2004 Reviews: 110
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Sun Oct 02, 2005 7:14 pm
I enjoyed this very much! I too was bummed that it was so short. Nicely done!
I've read this before and thought I had reviewed it, but maybe elsewhere...?
anyway - quite enjoyable, you know I enjoy your style, and how you always treat the reader with some intriguing twist - that isn't really so much a twist as it is a quite sensible thought that comes from an unexpected direction.