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theladyscribe
Joined: 26 Sep 2005
Reviews: 36
Location: cowtown, tn
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Tue Sep 27, 2005 5:56 pm
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| *grins* I like the dynamics between your Eomer and Lothiriel. And I am so very glad that Legolas has a sense of humor! He didn't in the movies, and he should have. The archery tournament is quite enjoyable thus far. I hope to see more of this story soon! |
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Saccopelista
Joined: 28 Sep 2005
Reviews: 36
Location: Italia
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Thu Sep 29, 2005 1:10 pm
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| Definitely a story with potential. Your Eomer is a very well thought through character, mature and manly ; Lothiriel comes across a bit girlish and immature, but she is rather young I suppose. I'm looking forward to the continuation. Will Lothiriel and Legolas succeed to cheat at the archery tournament? |
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Lialathuveril
Joined: 24 Aug 2005
Reviews: 36
Location: Switzerland
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Sun Oct 02, 2005 1:08 pm
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Thank you all very much for your kind comments. Since this is my first attempt at writing a story I very much appreciate to hear what you like or don't like about it.
I'll try to update regularly, but English isn't my native language, so I'm rather a slow writer.
Well, bear with me and I hope you enjoyed the archery tournament.
Lia |
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theladyscribe
Joined: 26 Sep 2005
Reviews: 36
Location: cowtown, tn
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Sun Oct 02, 2005 2:34 pm
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Wow, English is not your native language? I never would have guessed!
I love the comparison of Eomer to a mumakil. It suits him. And the falcon suits Lothiriel. I especially liked the part about "I pity the man who make you his wife." Those sorts of lines are the best.  Keep this story coming! Sere mi Eru...LSoA |
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Cuthalion
Joined: 10 Jul 2004
Reviews: 79
Location: Germany
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Sun Oct 02, 2005 3:50 pm
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Bravissimo! That archery competition was brilliantly written, I held my breath several times (and the argument between Lothiriel and Éomer was not bad either...  ) Wonderful, wonderful story! |
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Neniel
Joined: 30 Dec 2004
Reviews: 49
Location: Hiding from the men in white. Contrary to common belief, psychiatrists are *very* sneaky people
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Sun Oct 02, 2005 4:37 pm
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| Oh, I just loved the new chapter! The archery contest was a joy to read and you had me biting mynails half-way through it! Your Lothíriel is simply wonderful and Eomer follows closely behind. I simply can't wait to read of what is coming up next! |
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Saccopelista
Joined: 28 Sep 2005
Reviews: 36
Location: Italia
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Mon Oct 03, 2005 6:23 am
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The archery contest was very well written, detailed but not long-winded, instead exciting!
When it comes to Lothiriel I have to side with Eomer: she is a spoiled brat, not a swan or even a falcon but rather a scolding magpie. |
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Saccopelista
Joined: 28 Sep 2005
Reviews: 36
Location: Italia
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Mon Oct 03, 2005 4:39 pm
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One short additional note:
Mûmakil is plural; Mûmak singular; one Mûmak and many Mûmakil |
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Cuthalion
Joined: 10 Jul 2004
Reviews: 79
Location: Germany
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Sat Oct 08, 2005 3:03 pm
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| Delightful dialogues, as always. And now I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! What will happen next? An attack of Haradrim? Of orcs? |
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Sirannon
Joined: 04 Jan 2005
Reviews: 24
Location: Denmark
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Sat Oct 08, 2005 4:06 pm
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| I'm not sure what it is about this story, that makes me wait impaitiently for an update, perhaps it is that the characters feel like real persons, or perhaps it is your fluent use of the english language, I don't know. What I do know is that I am anxiously waiting for another update. I can't keep from wondering how such ill tempered characters will manage to rule the kingdom of Rohan. My compliments for a well thought out story so far. |
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