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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Thu Sep 15, 2005 6:52 am

This is lovely in its strongly emotive imagery. I just found the last paragraph, with its implied comings and goings, a bit confusing.
 
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krazykataave

Joined: 17 Dec 2004
Reviews: 127
Location: Immortalized by John Denver
Thu Sep 15, 2005 11:43 am

Beautifully done!
 
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rohanion

Joined: 09 Feb 2005
Reviews: 216
Location: uk
Thu Sep 15, 2005 1:37 pm

Lovely descriptive imagery, the pounding of hooves, the wet grass, the resplenant and powerful Lord Eomer - I could see it all!

Very nicely written, oh, and Lothiriel realises she loves him as well..awww Heart smiley face
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Sat Sep 17, 2005 7:49 am

Very descriptive. I can almost hear the thunder, oh wait, that was here; it is raining. But, anywho, I have seen this scene many time: in movies and personally when riding. You have captured it very well. Thank you for sharing.
 
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Rhapsody

Joined: 11 Apr 2004
Reviews: 479
Location: Maglor's Lap
Mon Sep 19, 2005 3:04 pm

As one they rode through the cold misty morning, Rohan’s riders, children of the wind.

Beautiful prose, what more can I add to what already has been said. As a horseperson myself, I could feel what you wanted to bring across. A great drabble Neniel!
 
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Laiquendi

Joined: 14 May 2005
Reviews: 36
Location: Ireland
Tue Oct 11, 2005 4:00 pm

Beautiful ! Very Happy smiley face

I really love the image of the exploding droplets of water as the horses hooves impact against the damp earth.....lovely imagery !

Lai.
 
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