Reviews for "Burden of Guilt"

Thu Apr 27, 2006 7:19 am

Its a very good story but I think you should have a look on this chapeter. All the scenteses and words are raight after each other. its very difficult to read. You forgett where you are all the time. But I did like the story a lot.

Fri May 04, 2007 3:25 pm

I am enjoying this story so much! Poor Aragorn and Faramir! I don't feel as sorry for Eomer--stroming Minas Tirith like that and drawing swords, not very wise. I wonder how Eowyn will feel hearing the news. Both her husband and her brother being so ill.

Sat May 19, 2007 12:17 am

It looks like they will finally talk and put things out in the open. Poor Faramir! When you warned about angst, you weren't kidding!

Fri Jun 08, 2007 2:41 pm

This is a great story. Can't wait for the next chapter. The poor baby has to pull through.

dogreign

Wed Jun 20, 2007 10:29 am

Just wanted to let you know that I continue to enjoy this story. Just when the angst lightens up and everyone seems on the mend, Eomer comes in and fouls things up. I seriously think he suffered some brain damage during the war and his injury resulting from his attack on Faramir did not play much of a role in scrambling his brains.

Fri Jun 29, 2007 8:08 am

Maybe this extra blow will knock something in his head back in place!

Fri Jun 29, 2007 8:21 am

Hope another bump on the head knocks some since into Eomer
Smile smiley face

Great chaper.

dogreign

Tue Jul 31, 2007 10:56 pm

Just wanted to let you know how much I have enjoyed your story. It is so well written. I am glad the angst is over and things are resolving ( I hope).

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