Reviews for "Lothíriel"

Tue Sep 20, 2005 8:07 am

First I would like to say that this is a really sweet story. Seeing Eomer torn between his sense of duty and love is nice. However I can't stop feeling that you may have rushed their relationship a bit at the beginning. How did they emotionally come from being introduced to eachother to Lothiriel asking Eomer to think of her when he rides to battle? I think you should have been a bit more expliicit in that part bof the story Oh by the way Amrothos is a hoot. Very Happy smiley face

Tue Sep 20, 2005 9:46 am

Very nicely written (it is almost impossible to write from a man's perspective when you're female) echoed the doubt that Eomer had to be feeling. A little more background story would help the story flow better, but its a sweet little story that is really a joy to read.

Kat

Tue Sep 20, 2005 11:01 am

It is a lovely well written story, perhaps a little bit rushed in its character development. Nevertheless, I enjoyed the read.

By the way, it is not too difficult to write from a man's point of view. I ask myself what I would do in a certain situation and then I let my male protagonist do the opposite!

Thu Sep 29, 2005 1:21 pm

I like the story line very much. Perhaps you should have made it a longer fic and taken more time for the background story and the introduction of the characters. Beside that it was an enjoyable read.

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