Reviews for "Spring Kiss"

Tue Sep 27, 2005 8:53 pm

This is outstanding! The dialogue between Merry and the lass was witty and very hobbit-y and the...romance was really well done and very steamy. I really loved it!

Tue Sep 27, 2005 10:34 pm

Excellent smuttiness and a great twist at the ending. I'm growing to enjoy Hobbit fics more and more. As for this one, I love it. Smile smiley face

Wed Sep 28, 2005 6:56 am

This is a perfect example of why i love your stories--this is Tolkien, not simply erotica. The hobbits are hobbits. Merry is Merry, not just someone generic. And the 'maiden' (though that term doesn't really apply to her anymore, does it? Wink smiley face

) has strong characterization, even in a short vignette. And the PWP part is very tasteful but still very hot. This is a great piece, SML!

Wed Sep 28, 2005 10:42 am

I think everyone has said it, but I shall say it again - I love everything about this. I love the tone of the writing, the very 'Hobbity' feel it all has, the imagery (loved, in particular, the big fat pearl moon - that is one of those similes that sticks with you for ages). I love that the characterisation is so spot on and 'real', as always. Honestly, I would pay to read your work. In fact I enjoy this for the style and everything far more than I enjoy most books I have paid for.

SW the Fangirlly

Fri Oct 07, 2005 12:07 pm

A very tasteful, steamy and extra hobbity fic Smile smiley face

Love it. I'll echo others by saying I admire your writing style, the characters are lovable and extremely well written. Very Happy smiley face

Thanks
Binka

Sun Oct 16, 2005 8:20 am

*Cackles with delight*

Oh, Sil! You sleigh me! I LOVED this. Cocksure Merry and the wonton farm lass....bwhahahaha!!!! I'm sure he'll never be able to think of harvest without the thought of laying his seed first, ever again! *giggles*

This was beautifully written and outstandingly portrayed.

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