Joined: 12 May 2003 Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Mon Oct 03, 2005 4:47 pm
What has he got in his pocketses?
An interesting and poignant tale, Simon. I especially liked that you chose to examine this small but vital moment in the text.
inglor
Joined: 26 Apr 2004 Reviews: 201
Location: Not here, not there, not anywhere
Tue Oct 18, 2005 4:32 pm
I really like explorations like this and giving a story to some faceless guy whose name we don't know but we know what revolved around his part in the story. Nicely written. Echoing NB, interesting choice. Will think of this fic when I read that part of The Story again.