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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Mon Oct 03, 2005 4:25 pm

You are choosing nice, character forming moments for your poems of Sam and Frodo, but they do little other than paint a quick vignette. I wonder, how Sam feels about the garden, the day, etc. why it's important to him etc. I'd look to see a bit more of that.
 
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