Reviews for "I can only manage One"

Tue Oct 11, 2005 5:30 pm

Well, what can I say that hasn't already been said about this wonderful story? Smile smiley face

Your characterizations are fantastic, and you've got a wonderful plotline. I really thought the part where Lothiriel was worried about her hair was very true to life - she is a young woman, after all.

Great work! I can't wait to read more.

Michelle...

Thu Oct 13, 2005 12:40 pm

Loving it, again.
Characters are fine. I have to remember to take in great gulps of air (or I'll suffocate). More than fine, actually, they are wonderful.

fabulous, and very entertaining reading.

Tue Oct 18, 2005 6:18 pm

Ooh, this should be interesting. Another great chapter. I hope Lothiriel confronts her father about forcing her into this marriage. It might make her feel better. Good chapter, can't wait for the next one!

Wed Oct 19, 2005 2:02 am

Bema! I wonder who just came in through the door! Smile smiley face

I think Lothiriel's efforts are very sensible and in a way very sweet. I quite like the fact that allthough she is not too keen on the idea of marrying Eomer and becoming the Queen of Rohan, she is still making a real effort to get to know the customs and the history of the people.

I love the fact that she is so concerned about her hair. Laughing smiley face

Without a doubt I would be too. I also loved the bit where she decided that it would be a good idea to discuss war strategies with Eomer over the dinner. I mean, that is definately the most important thing to know about your husband: his thoughts on weapons and war. Wink smiley face

I suppose it just shows how nervous and inexperienced she is. How sweet.

thanks again for writing such and entertaining and well thought out story.

Ilmatar, the serial reviewer.

Wed Oct 19, 2005 5:46 am

More! You cannot leave me hanging like this! It is too cruel...*weeps and pleads* more please!

Wed Oct 19, 2005 1:29 pm

Good continuation.
This Lothiriel is the kind of girl I always feel tempted to kick!

Wed Oct 19, 2005 4:13 pm

I really like your version of Lothiriel. She's exactly how I've always imagined her to be - sweet, pretty, and strong-willed...with a bit of mischieviousness mixed in for good measure. Although we can only guess at the way in which she and Eomer were introduced, your take on the events surrounding their marriage is completely believable and probable. Smile smiley face

You're doing a wonderful job, and I absolutely love the way that you ended the chapter. "BEMA" ha ha...I loved that!

Keep up the good work! I'm really hoping that this will be a LONG story *crosses fingers and toes* I absolutely *LOVE* Eomer/Lothiriel fics!

Michelle... Very Happy smiley face

Fri Oct 21, 2005 11:14 am

More of same. Excellent characterizations. I like what you have done with Aragorn. I like what you have Lori doing. Curse you and your cliffhanger, absolutely vile. Very Happy smiley face

Inglor

Fri Oct 21, 2005 11:32 am

I'm really enjoying this! Hope you update soon, I gotta know who came through the door!

Tue Oct 25, 2005 1:17 pm

Now we are getting to the interesting part. Here comes the hero, and what a grand entrance, rescuing the slightly clumsy heroine. Wonderful conversation between the two. Let's hope for Lothiriel he stays that patient. But do we really want him that tame? Maybe a little bit more temper.

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